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Turns Out I’m a Robot. (Some Thoughts on AI Fiction)

What I learned from co-writing a story with seven LLMs.

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Daniel Nest
Jul 10, 2025
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Welp, that was quite unexpected!

Last Thursday, I ran a silly experiment that cobbled together a flash fiction story from eight separate passages written by different large language models:

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The result was a semi-coherent sci-fi piece that didn’t feel particularly satisfying. As a curveball, I wrote one of the sections myself and asked my readers to guess which.

Warning: If you want to participate, this is your last chance to read “Seventeen Thousand Raindrops” and try guessing my section before I spoil everything below.

Eight people tried to guess which section was mine, with the following results:

  • Section #1 (2 guesses)

  • Section #5 (1 guess)

  • Section #6 (1 guess)

  • Section #8 (2 guesses)

Here’s the twist: I didn’t write any of those sections.

Nobody correctly identified the human-written passage, although one guesser mentioned it as a vague possibility along with another section.

This can only mean one of three things:

  1. My attempt to blend in among large language models was a resounding success.

  2. Large…

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